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NaNoWriMo 2023

NaNoWriMo Day Ten

So Day Ten, wow it has gone by quick. Here are the beats fresh from Sudowrite - note the instructions in parentheses, they seemed to help generate more words - a whopping 5321 - but it will need a lot of editing, so maybe I’ll get 3000 to 3500 of usable prose when the time comes to turn this mess into something readable. But it has been fun.

[Expand each beat to have more detail, descriptions, intense action, violence, and dialogue]

[Each beat must be between 500 and 1000 words of prose, use deep details, rich full descriptions, intense action, and character driven dialogue]

1. Jon and General Millmore carefully stepped into the dank tunnel, their shadows stretching long in the eerie darkness. The chill from the darkness seeped through every crack of Jon's worn armor while they steadily progressed through the twisting catacombs.

2. They were greeted with a crossroads; multiple pathways forked off in different directions. With no time to hesitate, they had to make a critical decision on which path to take.

3. Jon used his keen tactical eye to choose the small path that led to a dead end. He motioned for General Millmore to follow as he quickly devised a plan - setting an ambush for the mercenaries who relentlessly pursued them. Jon set his coat at the end of the corridor, making it look like someone was hiding next to a crate but was doing it dadly.

4. Millmore threw himself behind a pile of crates at the entrance to the tunnel, crouching as low as he could to avoid detection, while Jon readied himself at the far end of the corridor, primed for the attack.

5. The mercenaries stomped closer, their heavy combat boots clanging against the metal walls of the hallway as they inched towards the dead end. Their rifles remained raised in anticipation, never letting their guard down for a moment.

6. Without warning, Jon slammed his fist on a hidden mechanism, activating an explosive booby trap that sent the chunks of debris tumbling across the path leading back to him and Millmore, blocking it completely and trapping the hapless mercenaries inside. Their screams echoed through the halls as they desperately tried to escape the confines of this makeshift prison.

7. The mercenaries curse and yell, running frantically in all directions as they search for an escape route. Jon and Millmore, however, remain composed and determined as they swiftly surge ahead to the next section of the tunnels.

8. Upon entering a wider junction area with multiple intersecting pathways, Jon and Millmore seize the chance to create another bottleneck.

9. With uncanny precision and speed, Jon carefully places explosive charges at various points around them, guaranteeing that the enemy will be funneled into one distinct path. He works without speaking a word, yet even in this chaos his movements are precise as if calculating each step he makes.

10. Millmore crawled along the wet concrete, gun in hand, his finger on the trigger ready to provide cover fire as soon as Jon triggered the explosives. The noise of the blasts would echo through the tunnels, rattling their eardrums and disorienting their pursuers.

11. The mercenaries were taken by surprise; before they had a chance to gather their scattered wits, the aftershocks of the explosions reverberated through the tunnels causing rocks and debris to rain down from above. A cloud of dust filled the air making it difficult for them to see or breathe.

12. Amidst the chaos, Jon and Millmore moved with purpose and agility, never losing sight of their goal or wasting precious time debating which turns to take as they navigated the winding underworld like seasoned veterans.

13. They skidded to a halt, the ragged sound of their footsteps echoing off the grimy walls of the tunnel. Suddenly, a harsh voice bellowed out from a few yards ahead - an intimidating group of heavily armed mercenaries had emerged with weapons trained at them.

14. Jon and Millmore's pulse raced as they lifted their guns and took cover. A furious exchange of fire ensues, the deafening noise filling every corner of the cramped space. Bullets ricocheted off all sides, sparks flying as they whizzed past in a blur.

15. With each shot they landed, Jon and Millmore inched closer to their goal while the numbers of their enemies dwindled. Finally, with one last round of ammunition, they saw their chance and dashed for the exit, screaming into the darkness as they launched themselves into battle


So, below here - enter at your own risk. It is full of loops and repeated sections, but I am hopeful that I can salvage about 3000 words, and then by the time I add my own personal touches it will likely be back up to about 4000 for the chapter over all, or I’ll split it into two chapters and make them smaller but punchier.

1 - 2

Jon's breath materialized as a cloud of white mist before disappearing into the inky darkness. He and General Millmore moved cautiously through the dank tunnel, their long shadows cast by the dim glow of Jon's wrist-mounted tactical light. The chill seemed to seep through every crack in his worn armor, but he gritted his teeth and forced himself to focus on the task at hand.

"Feels like we're walking straight into the belly of the beast," Jon muttered, his voice barely audible over the distant drip of water echoing off the walls.

"Stay sharp, Savage," Millmore replied gruffly, his voice carrying the weight of authority that only years of military command could hone. "We've come this far. We can't afford to make any mistakes now."

As they made their way deeper into the twisting catacombs, Jon felt a nagging sense of unease gnawing at the edge of his consciousness. This wasn't his first time navigating the treacherous underbelly of the planet, but something felt…different. More sinister.

"Something doesn't feel right, General," Jon admitted, his instincts prickling with the sense that they were being watched. "I don't like it."

"Trust your gut, son," Millmore said, scanning their surroundings with steely eyes. "It's kept you alive this long, hasn't it?"

Jon smirked, despite the tension coiling in his chest. "Yeah, well, let's hope it keeps working its magic."

The pair continued forward, the oppressive darkness pressing in on them like a physical weight. Suddenly, they found themselves at a crossroads. Multiple pathways stretched out before them, each one shrouded in shadows and concealing untold dangers.

"Shit," Jon breathed, his gaze darting between the various tunnels. With time running short and their pursuers hot on their heels, there was no room for hesitation. They needed to make a decision, and fast. But which path would lead them to safety, and which would spell their doom?

"Any ideas, General?" Jon asked, his voice betraying a hint of uncertainty.

"Take the left," Millmore replied, his tone unwavering in its conviction. "There's a faint draft coming from that direction. It might lead us to an exit."

"Or straight into a trap," Jon countered, his mind racing with possibilities as he assessed each tunnel. "We need to be sure, sir."

"Then make up your damn mind, Savage!" Millmore barked, his patience clearly wearing thin. "We don't have time to stand around debating this!"

Jon's jaw clenched, frustration mingling with anxiety. He knew the general was right, but something deep within him resisted the urge to simply charge forward blindly. Instead, he closed his eyes and took a deep breath, allowing his instincts to guide him.

"Right," he whispered, opening his eyes and nodding toward the tunnel on the opposite side. "We go right."

"Are you certain?" Millmore asked, raising an eyebrow skeptically.

"Call it a hunch," Jon said, a wry smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. "But I've got a good feeling about this one."

"God help us," Millmore muttered, shaking his head as he followed Jon down the chosen path, their footfalls muffled by the damp earth beneath them.

Their progress was slow and painstaking, with every step carrying the potential for disaster. Yet, despite the ever-present danger, Jon couldn't shake the sense that they were making the right choice. As they pressed onward, the air began to grow warmer, the oppressive chill gradually giving way to a more tolerable temperature.

"Feels like we're getting closer to the surface," Jon remarked, allowing himself a moment of cautious optimism. "Just a little further, and we might be home free."

"Let's not get ahead of ourselves," Millmore warned, his voice a low rumble. "We're not out of the woods yet."

Jon nodded in agreement, his resolve steeling as they continued forward. They had faced countless obstacles and adversaries on their journey, but he was determined to see this mission through to the end – whatever the cost. And with General Millmore by his side, he felt an unwavering sense of confidence that they would emerge victorious.

"Come on, sir," he said, casting a glance over his shoulder at the grizzled general. "Let's show these bastards what we're made of."

3 - 4

"Left, then right," Jon thought as he surveyed the crossroads, his keen tactical eye quickly taking in the layout of the intersecting tunnels. He motioned for General Millmore to follow him down the smallest path that led to a dead end. "Trust me on this one, sir."

"Damn it, Jon," Millmore muttered under his breath, casting a wary glance at the other passages before following Jon's lead.

The tunnel narrowed as they progressed, forcing them to move single file. Jon could feel the dampness seeping into his worn armor and the claustrophobia closing in with each step. Despite the discomfort, he knew that this was their best option to turn the tables on the mercenaries who were hot on their heels.

"Have you lost your mind?" Millmore whispered harshly, but Jon just grinned in response.

"Sir, do you think the enemy will expect us to choose a dead end? It's the perfect spot for an ambush," Jon explained, his voice barely audible. He caught a glimmer of understanding in Millmore's eyes as he set his coat at the end of the corridor, making it look like someone was hiding poorly next to a crate.

"Alright, let's make this quick," Millmore said, his tone still gruff but now laced with determination.

Millmore threw himself behind a pile of crates near the entrance to the tunnel, crouching as low as he could to avoid detection. Meanwhile, Jon readied himself at the far end of the corridor, his every muscle tensed and primed for the attack. The two men exchanged a brief nod, acknowledging their mutual trust and shared risks.

"Any moment now," Jon thought, his heart pounding in his chest, his senses heightened as he strained to listen for their pursuers' approach.

"Here they come," Millmore growled softly, confirming Jon's suspicion that the mercenaries were closing in. Their heavy combat boots clanged against the metal walls of the hallway, their rifles raised in anticipation.

"Wait for it," Jon whispered to himself, his fingers twitching with impatience as he gripped his weapon tightly. He knew that timing was everything; one false move could be the difference between life and death.

"NOW!" Millmore shouted suddenly, springing up from his hiding spot and raining a hail of bullets onto the unsuspecting mercenaries. Caught off guard by the ambush, they stumbled back, their weapons firing wildly into the darkness.

"Welcome to hell, boys!" Jon yelled, joining the firefight with an intensity that belied his calm demeanor. The corridor filled with thunderous gunfire and the acrid scent of burning gunpowder, each man fighting to survive the deadly exchange.

"Fall back, you bastards!" one of the mercenaries screamed, his voice cracking with panic as he realized the trap they had walked into. Yet even as they attempted to retreat, Jon and Millmore continued to press their advantage, determined to turn this fight in their favor.

"Stay down!" Millmore commanded, his voice resonating with authority as he provided cover fire for Jon. He moved like a well-oiled machine, efficiently reloading his weapon and taking down enemy after enemy with lethal precision.

"Almost there," Jon thought, sensing their victory drawing near. He dove behind a crate, narrowly avoiding a hail of bullets that whizzed past his head. Gritting his teeth, he counted the seconds before launching himself back into the fray.

"Gotcha!" he exclaimed triumphantly, taking out the last remaining mercenary with a perfectly aimed shot. As the body crumpled to the ground, Jon allowed himself a moment to catch his breath, his chest heaving from the adrenaline coursing through his veins.

"Nice work, Savage," Millmore said gruffly, a hint of begrudging admiration in his voice as he surveyed the carnage around them. "Now let's get the hell out of here."

"Roger that, sir," Jon replied, nodding in agreement. They had won this battle, but their fight was far from over. Together, they would face whatever challenges lay ahead – and emerge stronger for it.

"Let's move," Millmore urged, leading the way back to the crossroads. As they retraced their steps, Jon couldn't help but feel a renewed sense of purpose and determination. He knew that, no matter what obstacles they encountered, he and General Millmore could handle anything the galaxy threw their way.

5 - 6

"Shh, they're getting closer," Jon whispered to Millmore as the sound of heavy boots echoed through the dank tunnel. The general shot him a curt nod, gripping his rifle tightly while keeping his focus on the approaching enemy.

"Remember, steady hands and cool heads," Jon reminded himself, trying to calm his pounding heart. As the footsteps grew louder, he could almost feel the ominous vibrations of their pursuers' march shaking the walls around them.

"Contact!" Millmore growled as he caught sight of the first mercenary rounding the corner. His aim was swift and true, sending the man crashing to the ground in a shower of sparks and blood.

"Nice shot, General," Jon quipped, already scanning the area for the next target. "I guess old dogs still have some tricks left."

"Save your flattery for after we've escaped, Savage," Millmore retorted, tension tightening his voice. He knew as well as Jon that one downed mercenary would hardly deter the rest from their hunt.

As if on cue, more mercenaries appeared, rifles trained on the seemingly empty corridor. Their eyes were drawn to Jon's coat, which remained draped over a crate at the far end of the dead end. They inched forward cautiously, weapons primed for any sudden movements.

"Three... two... one..." Jon counted down silently, waiting for the perfect moment. Just as the mercenaries were about to reach the decoy, he slammed his fist onto the hidden trigger, setting off the explosive booby trap.

The deafening blast shook the very foundations of the tunnel, drowning out Jon's triumphant yell. Chunks of debris rained down like an avalanche, blocking the mercenaries' only route back and trapping them within the confined space. The screams of those caught in the explosion mingled with those of their comrades frantically trying to escape the deadly aftermath.

"Damn, I'm good," Jon thought with a surge of pride, watching the chaos unfold. But there was no time to bask in victory – he and Millmore needed to capitalize on their advantage before the enemy could regroup.

"Come on, let's go!" Jon shouted, urging Millmore to follow as he sprinted down the tunnel. The general didn't need any further prompting, charging after him with grim determination etched across his battle-scarred face.

"Any idea where this leads?" Millmore asked between labored breaths, trying to keep pace with the younger man.

"Does it matter?" Jon responded, his voice tinged with dark humor. "As long as it takes us away from those bastards, I'm not too picky."

"Fair point," Millmore conceded, gritting his teeth as they navigated the seemingly endless twists and turns of the catacombs.

As they ran, Jon couldn't help but replay the ingenious trap he'd set in his mind. The satisfaction of outsmarting their pursuers helped fuel his adrenaline, pushing him forward even as his legs threatened to give out beneath him.

"Looks like we bought ourselves some time," Jon remarked when they finally slowed to a more manageable pace, his breath coming in ragged gasps. "But they won't stay disoriented forever. We need to find our way out of here and fast."

"Agreed," Millmore replied, his voice strained from exertion. "But first, let's take a moment to catch our breath. We're no good to anyone if we collapse from exhaustion."

"Speak for yourself, old man," Jon shot back with a grin, despite his own weariness. "I've got enough energy to outrun a supernova."

"Ha, you wish," Millmore scoffed, leaning against the cold stone wall as he wiped the sweat from his brow. "Just remember, Savage – pride comes before the fall."

"Let's hope it doesn't come to that," Jon replied, his tone turning serious as he scanned their surroundings for any signs of pursuit. "Because if we don't make it out of here, we'll have a lot more than our pride to worry about."

"Damn right," Millmore agreed, pushing himself off the wall with renewed determination. "So let's get moving. We've still got a galaxy to save."

"Roger that, General," Jon said with a nod, leading the way deeper into the labyrinthine tunnels. He knew that, together, they had the strength and cunning to overcome any obstacle – even one as daunting as the relentless mercenary horde hot on their heels.

7 - 8

"Damn it all!" a mercenary barked, his voice muffled by a thick layer of dust that hung heavily in the air. Jon and Millmore could hear the frantic footfalls of their pursuers as they scrambled to find an escape route.

"We've got 'em right where we want 'em," Jon whispered to Millmore, who nodded in agreement, his eyes narrowed and focused on the path ahead.

Without looking back, the duo pressed forward, their senses heightened as they navigated through the tunnels with grim determination. Jon's heart raced, adrenaline coursing through his veins like liquid fire. Every fiber of his being was tuned to the sounds, smells, and sights of the catacombs – each echoing footstep, the stench of damp earth, and the flickering shadows cast by their dim flashlights.

"Jon," Millmore muttered, his voice low and urgent. "We're coming up on a junction. Get ready."

"Right behind you, General," Jon replied, his grip tightening on his rifle as they rounded a corner and entered a wider area with multiple intersecting pathways.

"Perfect," Millmore said with a steely grin. "Time for another bottleneck."

"Music to my ears," Jon quipped, his eyes darting around the junction, assessing the best position to execute their plan.

"Alright," Millmore began, his voice barely audible above the distant cacophony of swearing and yelling mercenaries. "I'll cover this entrance while you set the charges. Make it quick – they won't be disoriented for long."

"Copy that," Jon replied, his breaths measured and controlled as he swiftly moved to place explosive charges at strategic points throughout the junction. He worked with practiced efficiency, his hands steady despite the ever-present danger lurking just beyond their temporary sanctuary.

As Jon set the last charge, Millmore shifted his weight, his finger hovering over the trigger of his rifle, ready to unleash a hailstorm of bullets on their enemies. Jon could see the tension in Millmore's posture – every muscle coiled like a spring, prepared for action.

"Charges set," Jon whispered, giving Millmore a quick nod before taking cover beside him.

"Good," Millmore replied, his voice barely audible. "Now we wait."

The air grew heavy with anticipation, as if the very walls of the tunnel were holding their breath. Jon's heart pounded in his ears, each beat a thundering reminder of the life-or-death stakes they faced. In this moment, there was only the mission, the enemy, and the unyielding will to survive.

"Get ready," Millmore muttered, his eyes fixed on the entrance where they expected the mercenaries to emerge. "Here they come."

The first mercenary rounded the corner, his gaze wild and desperate. Before he could even process the sight of Jon and Millmore, Millmore pulled the trigger, his rifle barking loudly as it spat out a stream of deadly projectiles. The mercenary crumpled to the ground, a look of shock etched on his face as the life drained from his eyes.

"Let's go!" Jon shouted, throwing himself into the fray as more mercenaries poured into the junction. He fired at them with ruthless precision, each shot finding its mark, cutting down the enemy one by one.

"Keep pushing!" Millmore yelled, sweat streaming down his face as his gun roared in his hands. "We can't let them pin us down!"

As the two fought back the tide of mercenaries, Jon's thoughts raced alongside the rapid-fire bursts of his weapon. They had to keep moving, had to stay one step ahead of their pursuers or risk being overrun.

"Jon!" Millmore cried out amidst the chaos. "Detonate the charges!"

"Got it!" Jon replied, his thumb hovering over the detonator, waiting for the perfect moment. As more mercenaries flooded into the junction, he knew that time had come.

"Fire in the hole!" he shouted, pressing the button and triggering a series of deafening explosions. The ground shook beneath their feet, dust and debris filling the air like a thick fog, obscuring their vision and choking off their breath.

"Move!" Millmore ordered, grabbing Jon's arm and pulling him forward as they plunged headlong into the smoke-filled darkness. Their lungs burned with each labored breath, but there was no time to stop – every second counted in the race to stay ahead of their relentless foes.

"Come on, Savage," Millmore grunted, his voice strained by the effort of pushing through the haze. "We've got this."

"Right with you, General," Jon gasped, his mind focused on putting one foot in front of the other as they charged onward, leaving the sounds of confusion and rage behind them.

With each step, they drew closer to their goal, their determination burning bright in the face of insurmountable odds. And as they barreled through the dark, twisting tunnels, Jon knew that together, they could overcome anything – even an army of mercenaries hell-bent on stopping them.

9 - 10

Jon's eyes scanned the dimly lit junction, taking in the intersecting pathways that sprawled out before him. He could hear the distant shouts and footsteps of the mercenaries echoing through the tunnels behind them. Time was running out.

"General, we need to funnel them," Jon said, his voice low and determined as he pulled a handful of explosive charges from his satchel.

"Agreed," Millmore replied, his tone mirroring Jon's resolve. "Do your thing, Savage."

In silence, Jon moved with catlike agility, placing the charges at strategic points around the junction. His mind raced, calculating distances and angles with pinpoint accuracy, ensuring that the resulting explosion would leave only one viable route for their pursuers to follow. Every motion was fluid, deliberate – the honed instincts of a seasoned warrior at work.

"Got your back, Jon," Millmore whispered as he crawled along the wet concrete, gun at the ready. His eyes never wavered from the path where the enemy would soon appear. The tension in the air was palpable, each man keenly aware of the life-or-death stakes they faced.

"Almost done here," Jon murmured, setting the final charge and arming it. He glanced over at Millmore, who gave him a curt nod – the unspoken signal that he was in position and ready for whatever came next.

"Three... two... one..." Jon counted down silently, his thumb hovering over the detonator. As the frenzied footsteps of the mercenaries drew closer, he knew that time had come.

"Fire in the hole!" he shouted, pressing the button and triggering a series of deafening explosions. The ground shook beneath their feet, dust and debris filling the air like a thick fog, obscuring their vision and choking off their breath.

"Move!" Millmore ordered, grabbing Jon's arm and pulling him forward as they plunged headlong into the smoke-filled darkness. Their lungs burned with each labored breath, but there was no time to stop – every second counted in the race to stay ahead of their relentless foes.

"Come on, Savage," Millmore grunted, his voice strained by the effort of pushing through the haze. "We've got this."

"Right with you, General," Jon gasped, his mind focused on putting one foot in front of the other as they charged onward, leaving the sounds of confusion and rage behind them.

With each step, they drew closer to their goal, their determination burning bright in the face of insurmountable odds. And as they barreled through the dark, twisting tunnels, Jon knew that together, they could overcome anything – even an army of mercenaries hell-bent on stopping them.

The path narrowed again, the walls closing in as if trying to crush them as they stumbled forward. Jon's heart pounded in his chest, adrenaline coursing through his veins as he fought to keep moving. He could feel Millmore beside him, the older man's labored breathing a testament to his own struggle.

"Jon!" Millmore shouted, breaking the oppressive silence that had fallen over them. "Up ahead! I see light!"

"Let's go!" Jon urged, pushing himself harder, faster, desperate to reach that faint glimmer of hope.

As they sprinted towards the light, Jon thought he heard the distant echo of gunfire. The mercenaries were still coming, undeterred by the explosions and chaos they'd left in their wake. But he couldn't afford to look back, not now when freedom was so tantalizingly close.

"Almost there, Jon!" Millmore called out, his voice hoarse but filled with a fierce determination that spurred them both onward.

"Cover me, General!" Jon yelled as they burst into the open, the cold air outside the tunnel biting at their sweat-soaked skin. He sprinted across the barren landscape, his fingers gripping the detonator tightly as he prepared to set off one final explosion.

"Take cover!" Millmore barked, diving behind a pile of rubble and opening fire on the mercenaries who'd emerged from the tunnel in hot pursuit.

With a deep breath, Jon triggered the last charge. The ground shook once more, a deafening roar filling the air as the entrance to the tunnel collapsed in on itself, trapping the remaining mercenaries inside an unyielding tomb of rock and metal.

"Is it over?" Jon asked, panting heavily as he staggered over to where Millmore had taken cover.

"Seems so," the General replied, his face streaked with dirt and sweat but his eyes shining with pride. "Hell of a job, Savage."

"Couldn't have done it without you, General," Jon said, clapping Millmore on the shoulder with a weary grin.

"Damn right," Millmore chuckled, his laughter mingling with the sound of distant explosions as they stared out at the horizon, ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead. Together.

11 - 12

"Damn it, they're persistent," Jon muttered as the aftershocks of the explosions coursed through the tunnels, causing rocks and debris to rain down from above. The mercenaries had been taken by surprise, but even disoriented and blinded by a cloud of dust, they refused to give up the chase.

"Keep moving," Millmore barked, his voice hoarse but filled with a fierce determination that spurred them both onward.

"Cover me, General!" Jon yelled as they burst into the open, the cold air outside the tunnel biting at their sweat-soaked skin. He sprinted across the barren landscape, his fingers gripping the detonator tightly as he prepared to set off one final explosion.

"Take cover!" Millmore barked, diving behind a pile of rubble and opening fire on the mercenaries who'd emerged from the tunnel in hot pursuit.

With a deep breath, Jon triggered the last charge. The ground shook once more, a deafening roar filling the air as the entrance to the tunnel collapsed in on itself, trapping the remaining mercenaries inside an unyielding tomb of rock and metal.

"Is it over?" Jon asked, panting heavily as he staggered over to where Millmore had taken cover.

"Seems so," the General replied, his face streaked with dirt and sweat but his eyes shining with pride. "Hell of a job, Savage."

"Couldn't have done it without you, General," Jon said, clapping Millmore on the shoulder with a weary grin.

"Damn right," Millmore chuckled, his laughter mingling with the sound of distant explosions as they stared out at the horizon, ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead. Together.

13 - 14

Jon and General Millmore skidded to a halt, their boots scraping harshly against the tunnel's grimy floor. The ragged sound of their footsteps echoed off the walls just as a harsh voice bellowed out from a few yards ahead.

"Freeze! Don't even think about moving!"

A squad of heavily armed mercenaries emerged from the darkness, their weapons trained on Jon and Millmore with ruthless precision. The cold glint in their eyes left no doubt that they were prepared to kill without hesitation.

"Shit," Jon muttered, his heart pounding in his chest as adrenaline coursed through his veins.

"Stay calm, Savage," Millmore whispered. "We've been in worse situations before."

"Speak for yourself, General," Jon retorted, the corner of his mouth tugging into a wry smile despite the gravity of their situation.

"Drop your weapons!" the lead mercenary commanded, his voice hard and unforgiving.

"Sorry, but I'm not really in the mood to take orders from someone like you," Jon replied, his sarcasm masking the fear that threatened to bubble to the surface. He glanced at Millmore, who gave a barely perceptible nod – they both knew what they had to do.

Without warning, Jon and Millmore lifted their guns and took cover behind the nearest pile of debris. A furious exchange of fire ensued, the deafening noise filling every corner of the cramped space. Bullets ricocheted off all sides, sparks flying as they whizzed past in a blur. The stench of gunpowder mixed with the damp air, creating a choking cloud that made it difficult to see or breathe.

"Any bright ideas, General?" Jon shouted over the cacophony of gunfire, his trigger finger working overtime as he tried to keep the mercenaries at bay.

"Same as always, Savage," Millmore replied, gritting his teeth as he returned fire. "Shoot first, ask questions later."

"Works for me," Jon agreed, a grim determination settling over his features as he focused on the task at hand.

As they fought, Jon's mind raced with possible strategies and escape routes. He knew they couldn't keep this up forever – eventually, their ammunition would run out or the mercenaries would overwhelm them. But he also knew that he couldn't let Millmore down. The General had always been there for him, a steadfast pillar of support in a universe that seemed intent on tearing Jon apart.

"Got one!" Millmore announced, a fleeting grin crossing his face as another mercenary went down.

"Nice shot, General," Jon complimented, ducking behind cover as a hail of bullets narrowly missed him. "Now we just need to take care of the rest."

"Piece of cake," Millmore replied, his voice hoarse but filled with a fierce determination that spurred them both onward.

"Cover me, General!" Jon yelled, pulling a grenade from his belt and tossing it towards the mercenaries. As it detonated, the tunnel was momentarily filled with blinding light and deafening noise, providing Jon with the distraction he needed to charge forward.

"Take cover!" Millmore barked, diving behind a pile of rubble and opening fire on the mercenaries who'd emerged from the tunnel in hot pursuit.

"Is it over?" Jon asked, panting heavily as he staggered over to where Millmore had taken cover.

"Seems so," the General replied, his face streaked with dirt and sweat but his eyes shining with pride. "Hell of a job, Savage."

"Couldn't have done it without you, General," Jon said, clapping Millmore on the shoulder with a weary grin.

"Damn right," Millmore chuckled, his laughter mingling with the sound of distant explosions as they stared out at the horizon, ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead. Together.

15 - 15

Jon's heart pounded in his ears as he squeezed the trigger, sending another volley of shots tearing through the air. The smell of gunpowder and burnt ozone assaulted his nostrils, a stark reminder of the warzone they found themselves in. Millmore fired off a series of rounds beside him, his grizzled face set with grim determination.

"Two down, six to go," Jon muttered under his breath, gritting his teeth as he ducked behind a partially collapsed pillar. He could feel the vibrations of bullets impacting the stone, mere inches from his head. "General, we need to keep pushing forward!"

"Damn right!" Millmore barked, tossing aside an empty magazine and slamming a fresh one into place with practiced efficiency. "Savage, on three, we advance!"

"Got it!" Jon nodded, mentally preparing himself for the next surge of movement. Every muscle in his body tensed, adrenaline surging through his veins like a tidal wave.

"Three!" Millmore roared, leaping out from his cover with a fierce battle cry. Jon followed suit, their guns blazing as they charged headlong into the fray. The mercenaries, taken aback by their sudden assault, fumbled with their weapons, struggling to regain their composure.

"Didn't expect that, did ya?" Jon taunted, his voice laced with sarcasm as he cut down another mercenary with a swift burst of gunfire. "You're messing with the wrong team today!"

"Keep talking, Savage," Millmore growled, his eyes locked onto his target. "That'll throw 'em off even more!"

As the two pressed onward, their enemies' numbers dwindling rapidly, Jon couldn't help but feel a swell of pride in his chest. Their teamwork, honed by years of experience and trust, was a force to be reckoned with. But there was no time for sentimentality – they had a mission to complete.

"General, I'm down to my last mag!" Jon called out between shots, his eyes never leaving the battlefield. "We need to make this count!"

"Agreed!" Millmore grunted, his own ammunition running perilously low. "Let's make a break for it – there's an exit up ahead!"

"Copy that," Jon replied, his heart hammering in anticipation of their final push. He glanced at Millmore, who gave him a firm nod, signaling that they were both ready.

"Go!" Millmore shouted, and the two men surged forward as one, their guns firing off the last of their ammunition as they barreled through the chaos. Bullets whizzed past them like angry hornets, but Jon's focus remained unwavering, his thoughts honed on reaching that exit.

A mercenary lunged at Jon, desperation painted across his face. With a swift, brutal kick, Jon sent the man crashing into a wall, his body crumpling to the ground like a ragdoll. He couldn't afford to waste any time – their window of opportunity was closing fast.

"Almost there!" Millmore yelled, his voice strained with exertion as he took out another mercenary with a vicious punch to the throat. The sound of bones crunching resonated throughout the tunnel, a grisly reminder of the stakes they faced.

"Come on, General!" Jon urged, his energy reserves dwindling as they neared the exit. The darkness beyond beckoned to him, promising safety and respite from the relentless onslaught.

"Jon, watch your six!" Millmore warned, his voice tinged with alarm. Jon barely had time to react as a mercenary swung a steel pipe at his head, narrowly dodging the blow by mere inches. With a grunt, Jon jammed his elbow into the assailant's gut, doubling him over before delivering a crushing uppercut that sent the man sprawling.

"Thanks for the heads up," Jon panted, sparing Millmore a brief glance of gratitude. They were both battered and bruised, their armor marred by the countless near misses they'd faced.

"Anytime, Savage," Millmore replied, his eyes gleaming with determination. "Now let's get the hell out of here!"

With one final burst of speed, Jon and Millmore hurled themselves through the exit, the sounds of gunfire and mayhem fading behind them as they plunged into the darkness beyond. Their bodies screamed in protest, their lungs burning from the exertion, but neither man would allow himself to falter. They had made it out alive, against all odds – and they still had a mission to complete.

"Damn, that was intense," Jon gasped, leaning heavily against the cold tunnel wall as he tried to catch his breath. "But we did it, General. We made it out."

"Indeed we did, Savage," Millmore agreed, a hint of a smile tugging at the corners of his grizzled face. "But there's no time to rest on our laurels. We've got more work to do."

"Right," Jon nodded, pushing himself off the wall and straightening his posture. "Let's finish this."

Together, they disappeared into the darkness, their resolve unwavering as they pressed on towards the heart of the enemy's stronghold.

D.S. Bayne